Argh. Why does it take laying a book out to catch certain errors? Maybe because the formatting really emphasises the flow of things, so you can see where it kind of breaks down. At this point, though, only absolutely essential edits are allowed.

In other news, I’m really liking the proofreading and edit-making directly in the PDF file.

I’m going to have to stop at three, though, because I have to pack for the trip.