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Orchestrated Overview

It didn’t really take very long at all to complete this. Here’s the breakdown:

12 May 2008: Original exercise (brainstorm a story idea, write a back-of-the-book synopsis)

May 2008: Expand 200-word synopsis to a two-page descriptive outline (same day, actually)

July-October 2008: begin writing once or twice a week (about 30K or 60pp)

Nov 2008: approx. 30K done over the month

Jan/Feb 2009: ten writing sessions to finish it

So overall, if one leaves out the day in May where I brainstormed the idea, it took eight months of part-time work on it. If one includes May to give a better overall idea of the development time of the idea/prep time for headspace, ten months. Eight to ten months is a very, very respectable timeline for a part-time novel.

Now, could I do it again? That’s the question. It would depend on the idea and how fully it was worked out in the synops(i/e)s.

Orchestrated Update: Ladies And Gentleman…

… as of 14h20 today, we have a complete first draft.

Yes, the damn book is finished. (For now. There will be revision, but let us celebrate the big huge first and most important step, yes?)

New words today: 1,713
Total word count, Orchestrated: 69,787

Zokutou word meterZokutou word meter
69,787 / 60,000
(116.3%)

Look! I made it in under 70K! And I love my 116% with much love. (Yeah, so 60K was arbitrary when I started; I knew I’d go over.)

I knew I was making cake today for a reason.

Friday Morning

The boy bounced into my bed at about a quarter to seven this morning and announced that it was a Grandma day, as indeed it is. We cuddled a bit and then he said:

    SPARKY: What if someone took all the Star Wars movies in the whole world? Then we wouldn’t be able to watch them at Grandma’s and we would be very sad.

    A: We would be.

    SPARKY: And they would have taken them out of all the movie places and the schools and everything, and no one could watch them, and everyone would be very, very sad.

    A: But then you and BunBun could fly all over the world and fight them and get the Star Wars movies back, and you could give them back to everyone who was sad, and everyone would say, “Yay, Sparky and BunBun!”

    [PAUSE]

    SPARKY: Well, that would be impressive.

He was so totally humouring me. HRH and I nearly died of laughter.

I noticed last night that Nixie has become extremely thin. I know why this is: Gryffindor bolts his food and then moves to her bowl because she has a couple of mouthfuls then walks away, expecting it to be there half an hour later. We’ve begun feeding all three cats less and Gryff and Cricket have lost weight, which is a good thing, but so has Nixie, who really can’t afford it. So this morning I gave her an extra bowl of food in my office, behind a closed door, and she ploughed through it like she was starving (erm). Afterwards she came and found me to purr at me and rub against my legs and hands, then tried to entice me into my office ahead of schedule. It was like she was saying, And now we’re best friends! We’ll play, and cuddle, and later we can braid each other’s hair! When she was born she was the tiniest of the litter, and we gave her an extra feeding every day to make sure she survived; that extra bit of nurturing and bonding time was one of the reasons she evolved into being my cat. Starting that up again isn’t a hardship at all.

There is warm air outdoors, there is melting snow, there was sun for about five minutes till it got above the overcast line, work on the anthology continues apace, and I have a single two-part scene to write before the Orchestrated will officially be a complete first draft. That’s today’s goal, and then it’s out of the way for when the anthology kicks into high gear next month as more completed submissions pour in. That’s not the only reason it’s today’s goal, of course: I’m really excited about the idea of actually finishing the novel. Usually my books get stuffed into a metaphorical drawer because I can’t decide how they’re supposed to end. Actually that’s not entirely true; thinking back, over the past four years only two have done that, the Poppy book (or Creating the Muse or the GCN or whatever you might remember it being called in its vast variety of temporary names) and the Pandora book. And I think about the Pandora book a lot, trying different resolutions in my mind. Many Names got finished, Balsamic Moon was finished (albeit in a two-page summary of the final chapter), Il Maestro e le Figlie di Coro is technically a complete first draft, although I think it needs an epilogue (I’ll confirm that if and when I ever revise it). Swan Sister is ongoing, as are the non-fic twins Harpsichord Dreams and the as-of-yet-untitled cello book, although all three are hibernating at the moment.

So yes: very exciting. I suspect starting with a brief synopsis, expanding it to a detailed synopsis, then writing from that synopsis is to be thanked for the actual execution of the project. (See how I cleverly avoided the word ‘outline’ there?) I usually prefer to write blind and discover what happens as I go, but I have to say, knowing the end helped a lot on this project. There are a half-dozen places where I would have stalled otherwise.

More tea! And I must see if those scones are still edible. And I should probably put a batch of bread on to rise.

Orchestrated Update

New words today: 869
Total word count, Orchestrated: 66,436

Kind of frustrating, as the power kept cutting out and my laptops were only at low battery charge and were therefore pretty much useless once they’d booted up. Also, deleted four hundred words before the end of the workday; if I’d left them in it would be more like 1,200. And I think I lost a hundred or so in the last power outage.

Still, more words than were there before. Inching closer to the end.

Orchestrated Update

Look! I wrote!

New words today: 1,558
Total word count, Orchestrated: 65,567

This may not seem like a big thing to you (I do it for a living, after all) but it is to me. You see, for the past month I’ve been making the anthology my priority: contacting people (both original contributors for clarifications and new potential contributors), working things out, discussing drafts, pinging people with reminders and sounding them out about ideas, and going through the existing material to make notes about it and fact-check and such. And I’m brain-dead by mid afternoon, and there isn’t enough energy to address my own work when my brain officially notifies me about overdosing on the anthology. (Remember the whole fibro-and-shutting-down thing? Yeah, that too.)

Well, today I decided to sit down and crank out at least a thousand words of Orchestrated. I’d been dragging my heels on it because I had written myself into a boring spot and didn’t have much of an idea how to work through it. The past couple of nights as I’ve been lying awake I’ve been thinking about it, and decided to end the chapter where it was and start a new one two days later in the story. It’s moderately ironic because I’m a huge advocate of ‘just go to the next scene that you know how to write and leave yourself a note in between’, but for some unfathomable reason I just kept trying to slog along to connect the scene that was over and the next major event when they didn’t need to connected at all.

My goal was a thousand words by noon, and here we are at noon, and I have over fifteen hundred, and thank gods I’m past that stupid swampy bit that I didn’t even need to be in. There’s a substantial amount of the last chapter that will end up on the cutting room floor, I suspect. And the official new target is 70K, which means I need to wrap it up in 4.5K. I might be able to do it, too. If not, I know it will be edited down to between 65 and 70K once it’s all finished and gets tightened up in revision.

Right! Lunch, then anthology wrangling.

Orchestrated Update

I should probably note down that over the past few days, between working on the anthology and cooking and running errands and things like that, I managed to do some work on Orchestrated.

New words Feb. 11-13: 2,644
Total word count, Orchestrated: 63,484

Slog, slog. I need to skip the little things and just get the characters and story to the next important thing on the list of things to write. I can smooth out transitions later. And not all of these new words are story, either; some of them are notes to myself in the body of the text to check things and rewrite sections with a different focus.

It feels like pulling hen’s teeth.